The story over long before the credits roll
the curtain was halfway down before we stood a chance
never got to see the budding romance
before the final act has even started to unfold
Our tale, a brief interlude from a bigger movie
could never flourish, would never grow
the script left unfinished just never flowed
only ever saw the beast, never got to see the beauty
No beginning or middle, all led to it ending
story held no structure, no one at the controls
the plot was in pieces, so full of holes
the direction was wrong from day one, needed amending
No one knew the lines, improvised all their scenes
the storyboards were flawed, the cast was too young
they didn't connect or share any bond
This tale was never meant for the screens
Was this comedy or tragedy?
seemed more like an horror story
a straight to TV release, a production so flawed
the faults could never be ignored
Even the worst movies have moments where the true love does shine
the screen kiss was real, the stars had their time
the story was bad, 2 stars at best, would never hit primetime
but it had lessons to teach, its heart was just fine
Thanks for reading.
Kyle.
Thanks for the comments, they are always appreciated
That's pretty fantastic, Kyle. And the line "only ever saw the beast, never got to see the beauty" really got me.
This was such an intricate and detailed poem, Kyle. Very nice, thank you for sharing!
Hi oh you’re so very talented