sigh such a heartbreak in the middle of the journey a scene in the subway where everyone is tired where they can't wait to get to their homes to wash the miseries of a long day like your tears unseen under the hot shower in the cold of cruel winter like the gathering of clouds at twilight where no one watch any more like your gesture in the mirror when you're done dressing your hair the way your beloved likes to see like the smile you get from the mirror and mirrors only smile as you smile mirrors can not see into your soul that you smiled when you wanted to cry and they can not reflect the truth that you wish if the mirror can hold that smile when you are alone in the dark weeping that mirrors can only smile back when the lights are on and when the light is gone the smile will be gone your light is dim your smile is fake and your forsaken in your room your eyes weep your soul creeps and no one to listen only the echos of your pain in the walls you built to protect you and you're crawling in the darkness wishing for a new day wishing to find your way like the gathering of clouds at twilight no one expect them to rain and they don't announce their presence with lightening like the smokes of fire where people sit around like the dreams at night like the plans of a youth as they smash into reality you want to smash that mirror to see get her to see the truth that you're broken into a thousand pieces would you mirror now reflect my broken smile would you weep when i weep would you bleed or would your shards cut my skin and make me bleed so heed me mirror if you may heed like a ghost you live you see the world with one eye all you see is right to left all you give is the opposite side of the truth all you see is good and you can't live like that heed me mirror as i give you my back and leave would you smile now at me to make me stay all you do will go astray or you would big me to stay and as my reflection go smaller as i walk away i won't let you see me weeping barefoot and you will cut the soles of my feet would you mirror care to save the last image before i vanish into the dark would my blood stains to sign my objection that's now is here to listen to my pain like a desert rose no one care lived and died in one season and no one noticed you will vanish in the memories of the ones who once loved you you will disappear in the crowd when it's closing time they will tell a prayer they will sing a song they might write a poem or two and soon you're just a ghost in the midst of fog of sadness you're another sigh in the midst of remembrance madness and the truth is soon you'll be forgotten and those who loved you will move on sigh such a heartbreak you won't be remembered as your deeds are the same of all those who came before and your legacy will be stolen and claimed by others my friend you're gone as if you never existed
thanks :)
There are quite a number of really "WOW" moments in this one. Well done.