The first fall of raindrops Pitter patter crazy chaotic drops Followed by a heavy deluge Gradually reaches its crescendo A constant hammering
As if the heavens are knocking at our door
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This poem paints a vivid picture of a rainstorm. The vivid imagery and creative language create a sense of anticipation and excitement as the rain builds to its climax. The imagery of the "hammering" of the rain is particularly poignant and captures the intensity of the storm. Overall, this is a well-crafted and enjoyable poem.